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Gift of the magi and The necklace are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
anything with a dog in it
ReplyDeleteBe specific.
DeleteHe is looking at female dogs or toys or some good bones or dog food.
ReplyDeleteHe could be looking at food or dog toys.
ReplyDeleteHe is looking at food.
ReplyDeletefemales dogs that he may think is attractive.
ReplyDeleteHow to get that dumb sweater off, that his wired owners put on him.
ReplyDeletei thought it was cute
DeleteHes online shoping for his ham bones and food,clothing
ReplyDeleteThe dog could be looking up or investigating of how the laptop works mabe he saw a picture of a can of dog food.
ReplyDeleteI think he may be on a doggy dating site
ReplyDeletethe dog is on walmart.com looking at the bones and dog toys.
ReplyDeleteThe dog could be looking at dog food products , dog toys and probably pretty lady dogs.
ReplyDeleteother pictures of dogs. dog food or dog toys.
ReplyDeleteHe is looking at a car and wants to chase it on the computer.
ReplyDeletedog would be looking up some new clothes
ReplyDeletehe looking up how to speak english
ReplyDeletehow to buy food or treats
ReplyDeleteother dogs or dog parks
ReplyDeletethe dog is looking for a new owner
ReplyDeletethe dog is looking for new toys.
ReplyDeleteThe dog could be searching for dog food, toys, or clothes.
ReplyDeleteThis dog is actually watching a series of funny Netflix shows that he has been watching for 18 hours straight. Netflix on doggy.
ReplyDeleteWhat kind of shows would a dog be interested in?
Deletedog food
ReplyDeleteHe could be looking for something new to do in his life.
ReplyDeleteHe's probably looking at bones and food.
ReplyDeleterandom stuff.
ReplyDeleteHe is trying to sale the owners cat online.
ReplyDeleteI love this!
Deletethe dog is watching a hot female dog twerking and trying to get the sweater off
ReplyDeleteThe dog could be looking up grammar or maybe a new friend to have around the house because he gets lonely. Maybe the dog is trying to sell the other pet in the house because he doesn't like them and want to be alone. The dog may even be looking up dog treats because he is hungry.
ReplyDeletethe dog is watching a funny pet video.
ReplyDeletehe could be looking and toys or dog food
ReplyDeleteThe dog is trying to get a new owner.
ReplyDeleteI think the dog would be looking at food that he might think looks good by the way his face is, or new toys fro him to play with.
ReplyDeleteIf somehow, the dog was able to get on the computer he would probably be looking up how to translate dog language to human language. He would probably be wondering why he had a sweater on like his owner did, which he didn't like. So, he would try to find out how to tell him to get it off.
ReplyDeleteI think the dog is looking at a female dog to find himself a mate. I think this because of the way he is smiling.
ReplyDeletethe dog is watching a video on how to get free bones or food from the owner who he knows will feed him if he is being good and listens to his commands
ReplyDeleteThe dog could be looking at anything. He is probably watching a funny video of another dog or someone doing something funny on like YouTube or something.
ReplyDeleteThis dog has just realized that he can buy something to pull his wrinkles back to make him look slip and trim for only 2 dollars. He is also on the other tab searching for more awkward sweaters to buy so his great owner can put them on him.
ReplyDeleteThe dog is looking for puppy chow recipes for his girl friend coming over that is allergic to corn on the cob. So as he is searching the inter-web and he finds a picture of Destinee holding a cat, he bites the screen and then realizes his owner is returning soon, tries to to fix it and he magically starts playing flappy bird, he gets addicted and has to go to a therapist for anger management skills. After the sessions the therapist prescribes him to go on e-harmony and find the love of his life and then he realizes she is psycho, the girlfriend kills him, his owners have funeral arrangements. But then they realize somethings gone wrong and the beginning of pet sematary two begins. This time nobody survives the neighbor records the whole thing and becomes a movie star millionaire with a maid that puts chocolates on the pillow.
ReplyDeleteThe dog could be on match.com, trying to find a date because he is lonely.
ReplyDeleteThe dog is looking up images of dog food and watching video/ shows over the walking dead and learning how to be the first dog to live in a zombie apocalypse world.
ReplyDeleteGift of the magi and The necklace are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeletethe last sentence should not be a run-on, it should be cut into two sentences or have commas were the ands are.
"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" needs to be in quotations and capitalized because it's the names of a story.
ReplyDeleteGift of the Magi and The Necklace are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the Magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. So does Della (the women in the necklace) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs.This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeleteGift of the magi and The necklace are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeleteEdit: Gift of the Magi and The Necklace are similar in a lot of ways, but they're also really different. Gift of the Magi is about a poor woman who cuts off a lot of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
Gift of the magi and The necklace are similar in a lot of ways, they are also really different. Gift of the magi is about a poor woman named Della who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain but he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeleteGift of the magi and The necklace are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is set washenol irony because she cuts her hair off and he buys him an chain and he buys some combs
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ReplyDelete"Gift of the magi" and "The necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, they are also really different. Gift of the magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the magi" and "The necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the magi" and "The necklace are" similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeleteGift of the magi and The necklace are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeletetheres a run on at "her husband a chain for his watch" put a . there and capitalize little
Gift of the Magi and The Necklace are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the Magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair ,so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. Little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
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ReplyDeleteGift of the Magi and The necklace are similar in a lot of ways,but they are also really different. Gift of the Magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so Della can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and Della got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della, the female in the story, know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeleteThe story "Gift Of The Magi" including "The Necklace" are similar and different in some ways. The "Gift Of The Magi" is about a couple named Della and Jim who are poor at the same time both Jim and Della have items that are dear to both of the characters.Soon Della cuts her hair off to give Jim a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive hair clip. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the hair clip.
ReplyDeleteEdited: "Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little did she know,her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs, this is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeleteEDIT: “Gift of the magi” and “The necklace” are similar in alot of way,but they are also different.”Gift of the magi” is about a poor women who cuts off almost all of her hair so she would have money to get her husband a watch chain. Little does Della know ,her husband sold his watch to be able to get her some very nice combs.This is ironic because Della cuts off her hair to get her husband a watch chain.And her husband sold his watch to get her the combs.
ReplyDeleteIn the short story of ''gift of the magi'' there needs to be capitalization and quotations of the gift of the magi. In the short paragraph also be specific about the details in the story change it up. It also doesn't need to be in parenthesis. And needs a period at the end of some sentences. And on the 5th line capitalization in parenthesis of the woman not women it wouldn't make sense.
ReplyDeleteIn the passage above the mistake is at the end, (This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.) ,because this is a run on sentence and it needs to be separated into different sentences. A way to correct it is ,(This is ironic because she cuts off her hair to buy her husband a chain for his watch that he sold for her combs.) Also another mistake is they forgot to capitalize the (N) in necklace. They could also make this its own sentence,and change (women) to (woman), (Little does Della (the woman) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs.) Overall you could add more detail about the story.
ReplyDelete"The Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "The Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair, so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. Little does Della, (the woman), know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs. Also it is ironic because Della got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs he got for her hair.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. Little does Della (the woman) knows, her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeleteI meant to leave the s off of know but i forgot to delete.
Delete"The Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "The Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair, so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. Little does Della, (the woman), know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs. Also it is ironic because Della got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs he got for her hair.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeleteGift of the Magi and The necklace are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the woman) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and, The "Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the Magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. Little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs ,and she got him a chain ,and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"The Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della, (the women), know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs, she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"The Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "The Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. Little does Della, (the women), know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair, and he got her combs, and she got him a chain which she bought with the money from cutting off her hair, and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair, so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. Little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. Little does Della (the woman) knows, her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the Magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. Little does Della, the women, know; her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair, he got her combs, she got him a chain, and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete¨Gift of the magi¨ and ¨The necklace¨ are similar in a lot of ways, but are also really different. ¨Gift of the magi¨ is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know, her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This shows irony because she cut off her hair and he got her combs; she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the magi" and "The necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of The Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "The Gift of The Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so that she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women), know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. Also it is ironic because she cut off most of her hair and he sold his watch got to each other gifts they both could not use.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. The "Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch; little does Della (the women) know that her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs, and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDeleteGift of the Magi and The Necklace are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. Gift of the Magi is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. So does Della (the women in the necklace) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs.This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift Of The Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift Of The Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the wife) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because Della cut off almost all of her hair to buy her husband Jim a chain for his watch but what Della didn't know is that Jim sold his watch to buy Della some expensive combs.
ReplyDelete"The Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "The Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair, so she can get her husband a chain for his watch. Little does Della, (the woman), know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs. Also, it is ironic because Della got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs he got for her hair.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della (the women) know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain and he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete"Gift of the Magi" and "The Necklace" are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. "Gift of the Magi" is about a poor woman who cuts off all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della know that her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain but he sold his watch for the combs.
ReplyDelete¨The Gift of the Magi¨ and ¨The Necklace¨ are similar in a lot of ways, but they are also really different. ¨Gift of the Magi¨ is about a poor woman who cuts off almost all of her hair so she can get her husband a chain for his watch, little does Della, the woman, know her husband sold his watch to get her some really nice and expensive combs. This is ironic because she cut off her hair and he got her combs and she got him a chain but he sold his watch for the combs.
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