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the whale is eating the fish while the women is swimming next to the whale.
ReplyDeletethen the whale will see the women and try to eat her but the guy with the camera shot the whale with a harpoon.
DeleteThe woman and the whale shark will continue to swim together. The whale shark will continue to eat fish and pay no attention to the woman swimming with it.
ReplyDeletethe animal is just happy to see the guy and wanted to be his friend but the man swam away because he got freaked out and left the animal by himself.
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ReplyDeleteI think that the whale is going to eat the women because he thinks that it is a big fish
ReplyDeleteor that he will not notice that she is not a fish so it will eat her with out even thinking about it. Also think that he may not eat her because he does not eat big fish
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ReplyDeleteThe girl is swimming by the whale and watching it while the whale is eating fish.
ReplyDeletethe big fish whale is going to swallow that chick hole. then shes going to gether knife and cut open the belly and swim away. then a great white shark full size is going to eat her. this one killed her so she cant get away now. they fine the shark kill it and get the remains out of it. sowl her body peaces back together and have her funeral. when they buried her she falls apart as she get buried. THE END!
ReplyDeleteThe girl is going to stay above the fish and push her hand across his back,then the fish will go on and she will keep on swimming then the fish will turn around and eat more of the little fish and just swim underneath of the girl.Then the girl will grab onto the fish and just let the fish do all of the work.Then the girl will go back up to the top of the water and get on the boat and go home.
ReplyDeletethe whaleshark is going to eat her, but he's going to spit her out because it's a human. The human and the whaleshark are going to be bestfriends. the girl sewed her legs together so she could be a mermaid and swim with the whaleshark forever and ever. They lived happily ever after until a plane crashed into the ocean and killed them both.
ReplyDeletethe whale is watching the girl swim and it is going to eat the fish that is swimming behind her.
ReplyDeleteThe whale will not pay any attention to the women and will continue to swim along with her while eating fish.
ReplyDeleteThe whale is going to eat the fish and do tricks for the lady to show off or she will swim the other way because she is scared or the person could be scared.
ReplyDeletethe fish will swim away when it relizes that theres someone there
ReplyDeleteThe whale is going to eat the woman then she will come out of his blowhole then a shark comes up out of the as she was falling down and then she punched him in the nose and swam away.
ReplyDeleteThe girl is swimming waching what ever that thing is and it is going to eat her
ReplyDeletei think the whale is accidentally gonna suck up the woman and be swallowed whole because there teeth aren't sharp enough to cut anything after the womans inside the whales stomach shes going to make a shelter out of things the whale has swallowed to stay alive and she eats the digested food of the whales. Then one day a box of matches the ones that water doesnt effect them so she gather up all the materials then she caught the whales insides are on fire and got shot out to the year 3030.
ReplyDeleteAfter a while the whale might eat her because it might mistake her for a fish. She tries to swim away but it grabs a hold of her and nearly eats her but she gets away bearly.
ReplyDeleteThe whale is eating fish while the woman is swimming above it. The whale will continue to eat fish when the woman swims off and never sees he again.
ReplyDeleteThe women is watching the whale eat the small fish. If the whale sees the women he might eat her.
ReplyDeleteI think the girl is about to get a ride of her life. I think the whale is going to put her on its back and give her a ride. I thank the whale is going to surfes and give her a ride back to shore.
ReplyDeleteThe whale will since that she is human and swim slowly away because whales don't eat humans. So they swim to the whale and hang to the tail and swim with the whale.
ReplyDeleteThe next thing that might happen is that the whale shark could slap the girl for being in its way, but as the picture no harmful act then again the shark might be calm and could not think that the person is not a threat to the animal. As the picture looks a peace full day and the animal is doing its normal day eating, swiming, eating again. Even though the girl looks calm she could have a fear since the whale shark is like 5 times her size!
ReplyDeleteThe woman swimming in what seems to be in a dangerous situation is actually having fun with her best aquatic friend, Seabus. They are having a blast swimming while Seabus, an awesome whale, is doing a whale process of sucking up small fish and water to supply themselves. In the end the woman leaves unharmed to wait another day to see Seabus.
ReplyDeleteThe whale is going to come going but,will not eat the person. I'm the picture it looks like the whale is below the person so I don't think that the whale will eat the person.It almost looks like the woman is just watching the whale eat, She is probably studying on how whale eats.
ReplyDeleteThe women might be doing something for a project and decided to go swimming in the ocean and met a whale on her adventure and the whale stayed at her side the whole time.
ReplyDeleteThe big giant whale fish is eating little fishes. And the lady is scuba diving swimming in the ocean beside the huge whale fish and what i think is about to happen is the big huge fish is about swallow the little lady. And maybe the opposite is about to happen the lady might try to kill the big whale fish or trying to catch the little fishes to eat them i don't know it's a prediction a thought anything could of happened.
ReplyDeletethe woman was on vacation and wanted to go snorkeling to check out the underwater sight. As she was swimming, she felt like something was going on, but didnt know what is was. She felt the water move up underneath of her, so she looked behind her and saw this gigantic whale behind her! The whale terrified her, and looked as if he was going to eat her, yet as she tries to swim away, he softly rubs his back across her foot to show that he is doing no harm.
ReplyDeleteThe woman is a marine scientist and is studying the whale shark for a project. She brought her friend which is in the picture with the whale shark.
ReplyDeletehe gets eating and when he gets eaten he lives in the whale shark tell on day the whale shark dies and the man lives but soon dies because the world has changed
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DeleteI think that the whale/shark is going to eat the girl or maybe even the fishy thingy is yawning and doesn't realize the women is there and is going to swallow her whole.
ReplyDeleteThe big fish is going the feed on the little fishes and the person swiming is about see it swim past and she will get out of the water because she is afraid to be eaten.
ReplyDeleteThe woman was on a vacation and wanted to go snorkeling, when she went snorkeling she wasn't paying any attention to the whale shark behind her eating the small fish, and i think that the whale shark will accidentally eat her also, but he can't actually eat her because it doesn't have sharp teeth like a real shark.
ReplyDeleteRight now in this picture the scuba driver is swimming from a big eating whale shark. Next, if he doesn't get away fast enough then he will end up getting ate. Well, he is swimming away the whale shark will be eating all the other little fish, but he will most likely get ate because of how close he shark is to him. Now, if this guy is fast he will get to the boat that he dived off of. When, he gets on the boat then the shark will jump up and eat the guy fishing on the tip of the boat. After eating that guy he will spit him out because he taste nasty. The shark will then keep trying to get the other people on the boat. Then the scuba diver will shoot the whale shark and drive the boat away as fast as he can. While, he is driving the girl and the other guy will be flown out of the boat and into another whale shark's mouth.
ReplyDeleteI think that the whale shark is going to eat the person that is swimming in front of him. The whale shark is going to suck up the person in its mouth
ReplyDeleteThe woman is a dentist, and she is brushing the shark whales teeth, he gets angry and sneezes and when this happens the dentist flies out of his mouth. Soon after that she tries to swim back only to find there is mucas all over the whales teeth. Once the dentist sees she gets a bigger tooth brush and scrubs the teeth. But oops she left the tooth paste on the boat so she has to use the whales toe jam instead. By the way yes, these whales do have toes. One time my cousin got a toe it was a monkey toe it smelled like a nursing home. Lotion and leather. #ew #toes #tooturnt
ReplyDeleteI think this is going to be like soul surfer when the girl don't see the shark and the shark is going to eat the women. Cause the women don't see the shark.
ReplyDeleteSusan dives deep. She lost her slipper and she is a mile from the shore. "I won't make it back without this," she screamed to the flying pelicans above. She pushed and pushed when a shadow came above her. She looked up frightened. "WHALESHARKKKK" she tried to scream but only water filled her lungs. He swam faster and faster and it was right behind her. Was it after her? About that time he was so close she could turn around and touch his mouth. The whale shark swallowed her. "It's dark in here," she said. She swam down his troat to a piece of tongue where she could breath. She soon found out Korean Jesus was in his stomach to. "That's why you haven't answered my prayers," Susan said.
ReplyDeleteThe whale eats the women and swims away to a shore. The whale lets her out and takes her to a shore and the women was thankful to be on land. Every since then she comes back to ride with the whale for a new adventure.
ReplyDeleteThis lady appears to be a whale rider, she looks like she is going to make to connection soon, by jumping on the whale sharks back and tying her self to the belly of the killer beast she will ride him to the depths of the ocean and then release it to throw a lasso to catch the tale of the wild animal and ride him back to the top. As he jumps out of the water to catch air like a champion and then flop back down in the water only to be defeated by his master the whale rider. she will grab him by the fins and then throw him in the air to feel the burn of the scalding sun and then pond back down in the water as he floats away..........belly up......
ReplyDeletemy feet are killing me
ReplyDeletethat suitcase weighs a ton!
ReplyDeleteAn example for hyperbole is it's raining like cats and dogs outside because it's a exaggerated statement.
ReplyDeletehyperbole - I had a ton of homework!
ReplyDeleteI have a million things to do.
ReplyDeleteI like PIZZA it the greatest thing in the world and did u kno kangaroos cant jump backwards....well u do now
ReplyDeleteGravity is so heavy and I fallen and cant get up(I need life alert).
ReplyDeletehyperbole- that dudes jumpin off walls
ReplyDeleteMy backpack weighs a ton!
ReplyDeletethere is a billion people in the school
ReplyDeletei have a ton of work to do.
ReplyDeleteI have more homework today then I did all year.
ReplyDeletei called like a thousand times!
ReplyDelete“I've told you a million times”
ReplyDeleteYour'e eating like a pig.
ReplyDeleteEnglish= My car cost like a billion dollars.
ReplyDeleteI have been here 110 years
ReplyDeleteIt is so cold i seen a polar bear wearing a jacket.
ReplyDeleteRelease the dog!
ReplyDeleteIt breaks me into pieces.
ReplyDeleteI had a ton of homework.
ReplyDeleteI met Kevin Durant, he was like 100 feet!
ReplyDeleteAll the pain in my heart and my body has broke me unto a thousand mini pieces!!
ReplyDeleteI'm so hungry I could eat a horse!
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