Scholar Start:
step one: revise your thesis.
step two: post the main idea of your first body paragraph, three supports (along with the sources you plan on using to back it up) in a comment on today's blog. You should have already finished this much on your research outline.
Agenda:
-Scholar start/blog post
-Independent reading
-Glows/grows
-Research
English:
Please look through the comments, and evaluate the person who has posted below your outline. Look to check that they have enough support; if they don't, please suggest ways they might improve.
English:
Please look through the comments, and evaluate the person who has posted below your outline. Look to check that they have enough support; if they don't, please suggest ways they might improve.
Thesis:Romeo and Juliet are are experiencing true love in the story because they have passion towards each other. they have intimacy and the two have a commitment with each other in their relationship.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA: Passion
A. Supporting idea: Passion is when you can’t get over someone. This attraction is overwhelming.
source(s) to back it up: Victoria, Samuel. "True Love: How Do You Know." psych central . 27 3 2012: 2. Print. .
B. Supporting idea: Romeo and Juliet are have passion in their relationship because they both cannot get over one another
source(s) to back it up: my own words
C.Supporting idea:If they could get over each other then they would not wanting to be seeing each other all the time and would not be addicted to each other.
source(s) to back it up: my own words
you can add a little more details in this
DeleteThesis: Romeo and Juliet are not experiencing real love because, if he loved her he wouldnt of killed her cousin, also he just met her, he doesn't really love her. he is just attached to her he didn't fight for her he left waiting for things to go over then went back, he didn't stay with her.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA:
A. Supporting idea: the couple does not care what their family think
source(s) to back it up: there families don't want them to see each other but they still do.
B. Supporting idea: he didn't fight for her
source(s) to back it up: he left for her to marry another man so the family wouldn't know the two of them wanted to be together
C.Supporting idea: there families don't want them to be together
source(s) to back it up: their families was fighting for whatever reason and don't want the two families to be involved in any way
Need more detail in supporting ideas.
DeleteRomeo and Juliet are not in love because just 12 hours ago Romeo was love sick over a different girl, Juliet and Romeo just met the night before, and Juliet is 13 years old, she is too young to experience true love.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good,but need more supporting details.
DeleteThesis: Romeo and Juliet were not experiencing real true love because even though they thought they loved each other, but Romeo still killed Juliet's cousin, part of her family, and got punished, and did not fight for her.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA:They had just met at the party so they are not well enough to be in love and get married the next day.
A. Supporting idea: They just met so they can’t be in love well enough to get married the next day
source(s) to back it up:
B. Supporting idea: Romeo had went to the party to get over his ex and found Juliet and fell in love"instantly.
source(s) to back it up: If they fell in love instantly they are probably not really in love.
C.Supporting idea: They keep it a secret and juliet is still forced to be married to paris but she can’t because she is secretly married to romeo.
source(s) to back it up:
It is good yet, it doesn't make much sense.
Deleteno because they are selfish,they only knew each other for a day and they don’t have a commitment
ReplyDeleteyou need to add alot more to your thesis and put your supporting ideads if you have any
DeleteThesis:Romeo and Juliet are not experiencing true love because he was in love with another girl in the beginning, and they are too young to tell what true love is, and she was going to marry someone else while she was fake marry to Romeo.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA:
A. Supporting idea: he was in love with another girl on the same day
source(s) to back it up: http://shakespeare.mit.edu/romeo_juliet/full.html
B. Supporting idea: he love Juliet and another girl on the same day
source(s) to back it up:Juliett is only 13 http://shakespeare.mit.edu/romeo_juliet/full.html
C.Supporting idea: He dont know what girl he want to be with
source(s) to back it up: http://shakespeare.mit.edu/romeo_juliet/full.html
Body paragraph 2 MAIN IDEA:
A. Supporting idea: they are too young to know what true love is
source(s) to back it up: http://shakespeare.mit.edu/romeo_juliet/full.html
B. Supporting idea: they got right married and Romeo didn't tell her about the other girl he was in love with
source(s) to back it up: http://shakespeare.mit.edu/romeo_juliet/full.html
C.Supporting idea: they would kill there self to be with them. when they don't know each other very good
source(s) to back it up: http://shakespeare.mit.edu/romeo_juliet/full.html
Body paragraph 3 MAIN IDEA:
A. Supporting idea:Juliet was going to marry someone else while she was “in love” with Romeo
source(s) to back it up: http://shakespeare.mit.edu/romeo_juliet/full.html
B. Supporting idea:she didn't know she would find Romeo and almost had to get married 2 times. that is not true love
source(s) to back it up: :http://shakespeare.mit.edu/romeo_juliet/full.html
C.Supporting idea: why would a 13 year old get married when she has a long life in front of her
source(s) to back it up: :http://shakespeare.mit.edu/romeo_juliet/full.html
it looks really good
DeleteRomeo and Juliet are experiencing real, true love because they are willing to give up their old love life to join each other, they also were willing to die for each other, they also can’t stop thinking about each other when they are apart. Romeo and Juliet is often timed wondered if it is true love or not. I believe that they show a strong feeling of true love. According to
ReplyDeletehttp://www.merriam-webster.com true love means “one truly beloved.” I believe they show this type of feeling for each other.
where does it say they cant stop thinking about each other at? You cant trust just one website, you have to kind at lest 3 to have a good writing essay. So far this will be a good writing piece.
DeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA:
ReplyDeleteA. Supporting idea:True Love is caring
source(s) to back it up: the ancient Greeks had many different names for different forms of love: passion, virtuous, affection for the family, desire, and general affection. But no matter how love is defined, they all hold a common trait: caring.
B. Supporting idea: True Love is Attractive.
source(s) to back it up:Attraction and chemistry form the bond that allows people to mate. Without this romantic desire for another individual, a relationship is nothing more than lust or infatuation.
C.Supporting idea:True Love is Attached.
source(s) to back it up:Like the mother-child bond, attachment comes after the initial attraction. Attachment is the long term love that appears anywhere from one to three years into a romantic relationship (sometimes sooner and very rarely after), and you'll know you've found it when you can honestly say, "I've seen the worst and the best you have to offer, and I still love you," while your partner feels the same way.
thesis: Romeo and Juliet are experiencing real, true love because they express emotions like, being faithful, being commited, and having a connection.
ReplyDeleteBeing faithful
A. Supporting idea: in romeo and juliet they knew that both of their families hated each other and did not want them to have any contact, alond with them trying to kill romeo once they found out that that the were married. they still were by eachothers side when all of this happened.
source(s) to back it up: Paul, Sheryl. "What Is Love?." Huff Post Weddings. The BLOG, 05 05 2012. Web. 25 Nov. 2013. .
B. Supporting idea: The moment laid his eyes on Juliet he knew he was in love. Romeo and juliet exchange looks all night, but dont talk until later on that night. he lost all feelings for the girl he used to love once he saw juliet.
source(s) to back it up: Paul, Sheryl. "What Is Love?." Huff Post Weddings. The BLOG, 05 05 2012. Web. 25 Nov. 2013. .
C.Supporting idea: Without hesitating he knew he wanted to be married to her and for the rest of his life. Having romeo and Juliet being in love at such a young age is bizzare, but shows that they do truly love eachother and would do just about anything to be happy. he kills himself to be with her only cause he thought she had passed and knew that he could not live with out her and wanted to be at rest with Juliet.
Thesis:
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA: Romeo and Juliet aren't old enough to be in love
A. Supporting idea: young people don’t understand love
source(s) to back it up: Teen romance: does love exist
B. Supporting idea:
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Body paragraph 2 MAIN IDEA: commitment
A. Supporting idea: that love takes time:
source(s) to back it up:
http://thoughtcatalog.com/mare-crowley/2013/08/can-you-be-too-young-to-know-what-love-is-is-it-possible-to-be-truly-in-love/
B. Supporting idea:
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Body paragraph 3 MAIN IDEA:
A. Supporting idea:
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romeo and juliet are not in love these 2 people are too young to understand love and they did not have a commitment toward each other and for there to be love present there needs to be some type of commitment.
Romeo and Juliet are not experiencing true love because they are to young to know what true love is and if they do have it or not, also 12 hours before he first meet Juliet at the party he was still love sick over some girl that did not like him back.
ReplyDeleteThesis:Romeo and Juliet are in love because they would do anything to be with each other,Romeo killed himself to be with Juliet and then she killed herself to be with Romeo.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA:They have freindship to be in love with each other
A. Supporting idea:Romeo just met Juliet and they became friends
source(s) to back it up:Romeo snuck into the party and they saw each other and decided to hang out.
B. Supporting idea:Romeo’s friend introduced them to each other.
source(s) to back it up:Romeo sneaks and talks to Juliet every night.
C.Supporting idea:Romeo and Juliet are now dating
source(s) to back it up:Romeo kissed her at the party
romeo and Juliet are not realising true love because true love doesn't i know this because i have been doing research and this tells me that true love doesn't exist, i believe true love doesn't doesn't exist because my mom and my dad wasn't in love my aunt and my uncle wasn't in love so there for true love don't exist. this is why romeo and Juliet wasn't truly in love with one another. I also believe that true love dose not exist. I think that true love doesn't exist i think this is true because Ive never really seen true love this is why i believe that true love doesn't exist
ReplyDeleteThesis: Romeo and Juliet are experiencing actual true love because they seem to not stop thinking about one another and are strongly attached, they have such diverse communication when speaking to each other in what seems to be a true manner of respect between the two of them, and they find the need to separate everybody else just to be together.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA: Minds and emotions are set upon each other consistently.
A. Supporting idea: They are constantly thinking about one another, thinking ahead, and coming up with strong ideas to find their way through love and family.
source(s) to back it up: The words describes this throughout the story.
B. Supporting idea: They create plans to fight past all negative ways of not being able to be together. They “think” about these things.
source(s) to back it up: The points in the story where Juliet makes the fake death plan, although it failed, she still used her love inside her head to create that plan.
C.Supporting idea: Having compassion and thinking about another is a vital way of getting through an relationship, letting your mind get to them when you physically can’t. Romeo and Juliet seem like the couple to do something like this.
source(s) to back it up: http://love-faith-relationships.blogspot.com/2012/03/four-requirements-for-true-love.html
thesis: Romeo and Juliet are experiencing real, true love because they express a high level of commitment to one another. Romeo and Juliet have trust, loyalty, and commitment.
ReplyDeleteparagraph 1
main idea: they will do anything to be together
source to back it up: hide from their parents to be together.
b. supporting idea: when Juliet was being forced to marry some guy she faked her death to be with romeo
c. supporting idea: when romeo heard that Juliet had died, he went to the tomb to see it for himself. when he seen that Juliet looked dead, he took his own life to be with her. when juliet wakes up from the fake poison she realized romeo killed himself so then juliet killed her self to be with romeo
You're going to need to have more points on your thesis, and you need to have sources to back up on each of your supporting ideas. Make sure you have correct grammar on everything. Capitalization being your key issue.
DeleteRomeo and juliet are experiencing true love because they have a special connection they have a bond that cant be broken. They wanted to be with each other so much that they killed them self
ReplyDeleteMain idea
They loved each other so much they killed there self to be with them
If some one loves someone that much that true love.
if your brain has chemicals then why would they make you kill your self.
you need more evidence and three example of what you need to be in love, for example I used: trust, loyalty and commitment
DeleteTrue love does exist, but Romeo an Juliet are not experiencing true love.
ReplyDeleteromeo is mostly self centered
1)he killed Juliets cousin
2)he left town just because he would have been prosecuted
3)he moved on to juliet way to fast there for basically saying saying he hated being not getting attenyion
Need more detaile about your reasoning and a better theise
DeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA:Romeo wanted to protect their love and had to kill Juliet's cousin.
ReplyDeleteA. Supporting idea: Romeo wants to protect her .He desperately wants to be with her all the time.
source(s) to back it up: He can't be with her there in separate families that don't like each other.
B. Supporting idea: Romeo loves Juliet so much he wanted to marry her the next day.
source(s) to back it up: Since he loved her so much he just immediately wanted to be with and that doesn't happen very often anymore.
C.Supporting idea: Romeo wanted to kill Tibble because he standed in his way
to keep him from seeing Juliet.
source(s) to back it up: Romeo didn't want anything standing in his way of Juliet.
romeo killed juliets cousin because he killed his friend it was an act of selfishness an he might want to be with her all the time but he showed no sighns of wanting to protect her
DeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA: Romeo and Juliet meet with one another without Romeo and Juliet’s family’s knowing about them meeting with each other.
ReplyDeleteA. Supporting idea: “You would miss that person every moment- This is the real test of your love. You would always miss the person you love each and every moment of your life no matter what. You would always want to be around him or her as much as possible.”
source(s) to back it up: http://EzineArticles.com/800280
B. Supporting idea: “When a man and a woman fall in love, they are intoxicated with happiness. They feel special and unique, but it's all part of an ancient dance of evolution, some anthropologists and psychologists contend.”
source(s) to back it up: Black, Debra. "Crazy Little Thing Called Love." Toronto Star (Toronto, Canada). 30 Apr 1994: L1+. SIRS Issues Researcher. Web. 12 Dec 2013.
C.Supporting idea:Some translated it to mean love at first sight – something which can only ever mean instant physical attraction, or some inexplicable quality that you’re drawn to.
source(s) to back it up: http://doestrueloveexist.com/
support A:you don't have to miss some one no matter what you will be so attached to them youll never leave them and they would like some personall space once in a while.
Deletesupport B:Its not in to days sosity its the native americans dance to get a mate.
suppors C:Not everyone can fall in love at first sight
Thesis: Romeo and Juliet are truly in love. They show passion and affection towards one another. They do what it takes to to be together.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA:Yes, they’re in love they’re willing to do whatever it takes to speak and be with one another.
A.Romeo and Juliet secretly get married so when the time is right they can just get up and leave together
source(s) to back it up: They took a big step in life and just got married
B.When Romeo snuck over to Juliet’s house they talked and then she invited him inside
source(s) to back it up: This all happened after Romeo killed her cousin. She was willing to put that aside so she can be with him.
C. Then Juliet and the priest came up with an idea so Romeo and Juliet could sneak off together.
source(s) to back it up:She fake her death and Romeo gets a massage saying about her faking it and they can sneak off together and be happy.
A.Good job.
DeleteB.Good use of punctuation
C.It should be she faked Romeo didnt get the message in time thats why he killed himself in Juliet's family tomb.But good job overall.
Thesis: romeo and juliet are not experimenting true love because, you can’t experience true love when you barely know that person, the first time you see a person it is not true love, you have to get to know the person first in order to be in love with the person. romeo seen juliet for the first time and thought he was in love without meeting her, he was heartbroken and looking for someone to love, he “fall in love with juliet”.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA:
A. Supporting idea: romeo and juliet didn’t show true love!
source(s) to back it up: He fell love with Juliet because he was heartbroken. He realized that Rosaline would never love him back. He became demoralized over that, which shows that he is a shallow person. He was depressed, so he was more susceptible to falling in love.
B. Supporting idea: Benvolio knew that Romeo was dismayed, so he convinced Romeo to go to the Capulet party. Logically, Romeo would forget about Rosaline. Benvolio really cared about juliet and didn’t want her to get hurt.
source(s) to back it up: that Romeo did not truly love Juliet, but was in fact in ...Both loves, Romeo and Juliet, are widely accepted as possessing a true love, but this is not so. ... He fell love with Juliet because he was heartbroken.
C.Supporting idea: Before Romeo met Juliet he claimed he loved Rosaline, but she didn’didn't like him back, yet he was convinced his love was deep. When talking to Benvolio he said, “A right good mark-man! and she’s fair I love.” He believed he was completely in love with Rosaline, but then thought Juliet was prettier. If he forgot and threw away his love for Rosaline that fast, why wouldn’t he do the same with Juliet?
source(s) to back it up: Friar Lawrence is saying he thinks Romeo doesn’t really love Juliet, he thinks she is beautiful. Finally, Romeo only likes her because she is prettier than Rosaline. When Romeo sees Juliet for the first time, he says, “Did my heart love till now? forswear it, sight! For I saw true beauty till this night.”Mercutio took Romeo to the party just so he can find a prettier woman, and Romeo no longer loves Rosaline the second he sees a prettier person, Juliet. Romeo just wanted to love someone, it didn't matter who, as long as they were pretty.
Looks like you have a strong thesis and great supporting evidence
DeleteRomeo and Juliet was in love, three reasons why i think this are.The first reasons is,they was to young to ever know what love is,the second reasons is that Romeo was talking to another girl,last reason is that Juliet was going to marry another guy.This is why i think Romeo and Juliet was not in love,yes they might of been in something they though was love at one time but never real.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA: They can’t be in love
ReplyDeleteA. Supporting idea: They just met at a party and didn't even talk.
source(s) to back it up: They met at a party then days later want to be married .
B. Supporting idea: They don’t know what love is.
source(s) to back it up: Juliet is only 13 and Romeo would have been more selfless instead of killing Juliets cousin
C.Supporting idea: They are too young to get to be in love.
source(s) to back it up: In the story it says that Juliet is only 13
need a lot more details,need more than one sentence
DeleteThesis: Romeo and Juliet do experience true love because Romeo and Juliet both killed themselves to be with each other.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA: Juliet and Romeo truly love each other
A. Romeo went to a party and saw Juliet they then they fell in love with each other.
source(s) to back it up: Juliet kissed Romeo at the party.
B. Romeo fell in love as soon as he saw Juliet
source(s) to back it up: Romeo and Juliet danced all night long at the party.
C.Supporting idea:Romeo and Juliet are truly in love because they both would rather die than go on living without one another.
source(s) to back it up:Romeo drank poison to be with Juliet and then Juliet saw Romeo dead and killed her self to be with him.
Romeo And Juliet are experiencing true love because Romeo has been showing affection towards Juliet ,as for she shows affection towards Romeo. With Romeo's strong feelings towards Juliet causes Romeo to kill him self as she seemed to be dead presuming that he can't live without Juliet so he commits suicide as for Juliet she sees Romeo's body as she too commits suicide because as she can't live without Romeo. All of Romeo's actions affected his life including Juliet's and for their actions. With Romeo's affection towards Juliet which means that they are in love. But Romeo's selflessness took his life including Juliet's.
ReplyDeleteMain Idea:How are Romeo and Juliet in love
Support:Romeo's affection towards Juliet
Support: Their actions based on love
Support: Romeo's affection towards Juliet
Romeo and Juliet text from the story
http://doestrueloveexist.com/
http://evanbailyn.net/thoughts-on-love/does-true-love-really-exist/ http://pages.towson.edu/quick/romeoandjuliet/famnlove.htm
Body paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA: Romeo and Juliet are not in love yet but they do have true feelings of love
ReplyDeleteA. Supporting idea: they are not in love because they are saying i love you and they barely even know each other.
source(s) to back it up: they have feelings that lead to love but they are not in love yet
B. Supporting idea: Romeo was love sick about Roselyn then he moved straight to juliet
source(s) to back it up: Romeo and juliet kissed and really didn't know each other that well
C.Supporting idea: They are too young to know what true love is
For your main idea give more detail of why they are not in love. Also have better supporting ideas that give your main idea a strong and well thought idea to support your claim. Give a better supporting idea then "they are too young to know what true love is" give a better support claim.
DeleteThesis: They were experiencing true love because they took major risks that could get them into trouble and surpassed them, then in the end they both die from miscommunication but when it comes down to it they killed themselves for each other.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA: Chemicals affect their love
A.Supporting idea:They died for eachother because they can’t live without eachother. source(s) to back it up: The chemical endorphin
B. Supporting idea: She was nervous every time she was around him
source(s) to back it up:norepinephrine
C.Supporting idea: I believe they were experiencing PEA when they were falling in love.
source(s) to back it up:phenylethylamine
for your main idea give more detail
DeleteBody Paragrah: #1
ReplyDeleteLove requires commitment (showing)
-Studies say that teen romance doesn’t exist when making some kind of huge commitment.
~Teen Romance: Commitment
-Romeo and Juliet made a commitment and married at a young age without their parents knowing about it.
~Even though their parents are rivals, they see besides the point and fall madly in love with each other.
-Commitment
~A commitment when you dedicate something, you are committing to it.
Good points! The sources are accurate an all seem to be things that can be proven
DeleteThesis: Romeo and Juliet are experiencing true love because for them to be together they killed themselves just to be with each other, they made a commitment to each other, & when Romeo first met Juliet he instantly attracted to Juliet.
ReplyDeleteMAIN IDEA: How are Romeo and Juliet in love?
Supporting idea: Everything they have done for each other to be together.
Supporting idea: Their actions based on there love for each other.
Supporting idea: I don't have that yet..
You don't have what yet? What's the supporting evidence for your supporting ideas?
DeleteThesis- Romeo and Juliet think that they are in love, but Romeo once said he was in love with another girl, also he never committed to her so how will we know or Juliet know if he will commit to her relationship with him, therefore only Juliet is in love not Romeo.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA: Romeo lacks of commitment for True Love.
A. Supporting idea: True Love needs commitment to be qualified as True Love.
source(s) to back it up:
B. Supporting idea: Romeo was supposably committed to another woman, than he rushed into love with Juliet.
source(s) to back it up: The play Romeo & Juliet
C.Supporting idea: Romeo killed Juliet’s cousin out of selfishness, so I don't think that would prove his “true love” for Juliet.
source(s) to back it up: Shakespeare’s play Romeo & Juliet
You did really good on your thesis & your supporting ideas, but on your supporting detail letter C.. I wouldn't use "I think". Use something else besides that. Other than that you did really good! :)
DeleteA. Supporting idea: When they first meet Romeo knew instantly that he was in love with Juliet.
ReplyDeletesource(s) to back it up: We read a true story about a guy when he was on the subway he saw the girl and instantly got connection with this girl. When she got off he recognized what she look like and made a website about her. He described what she was wearing and what she was doing. The girls friend saw and told her about. The girl contacted him and they got together to meet up at a place where they could talk. They talking and keeping in touch and they really bonded really well and the guy said they might have a future together.
B. Supporting idea: You can fall in love with somebody at first sight.
source(s) to back it up: “When Melanie, 42, fell in love at first sight she was having a coffee in a local café. ‘I got the impression someone was watching me,’ she says. ‘I looked up and saw a man with greying hair, who was smiling at me. I thought, I could do with a man like that. He looks happy but thoughtful. I could spend my life with someone like him.”
C.Supporting idea: They have never stopped loving each other to this day.
source(s) to back it up: "The feeling was mutual and a few minutes later he came over to talk to her. ‘I said to myself, “Yes. From now on you only say yes”. Since then I’ve never stopped saying yes to him."
Good job but you could put your thesis on here so we can see what you are backing up. Other than that you did a good job on your supporting details. :)
Deletehave you ever read the play or seen the movie Romeo and Juliet? well if you have not you should, both the movie and the play are lovely to watch. And in the play and in the movie they fall in love but it is true love? And the way Romeo and Juliet are experiencing real love is It was love at first site, They were married the very next day, And they would not live without each other.
ReplyDeleteSupporting idea: they lock eyes
Supporting idea: they fell madly in love
Supporting idea: romeo affection to juliet
You need capital letters at the beginning of your sentences. You need to capitalize Romeo and Juliet. You don't need to start you sentence off with and. You need to put a comma after not. But other then that it looks good
DeleteRomeo and Juliet are experiencing real, true love because it was love at first sight, Romeo killed himself because he thought Juliet was dead, then Juliet actually killed herself after she saw that Romeo was dead, and finally they did whatever they could to be together even though both sides of their families were not getting along.
ReplyDeleteThey are not in love but they think they are. If they was in love he wouldn't of killed her cousin and she would agree to marry another man. Also he stayed with her over night bur then left her in the morning.
ReplyDeleteThesis: Romeo and Juliet think they are in love, but they really aren’t, because Romeo was love sick and then moved straight to Juliet, they kissed as soon as the met because of attraction, and they already say, "I love you," when they don't even know each other that well; While they have feelings that lead to love, they are not in love right now.
ReplyDeleteBody paragraph 1 MAIN IDEA: Romeo lacks commitment
A. Supporting idea: He went from Roseline to Juliet when he said he was lovesick, because he “loved” Roseline
source(s) to back it up:
The poem
B. Supporting idea:
"Torn between two lovers feeling like a fool, loving both of you is breaking all the rules" (Mary MacGregor).
source(s) to back it up: http://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/in-the-name-love/200803/loving-two-people-the-same-time
C.Supporting idea:Commitment is the part of the relationship that provides safety and security, so couples can express their thoughts, feelings, and desires openly.
source(s) to back it up:
http://www.twoofus.org/educational-content/articles/why-commitment-matters/index.aspx