Wednesday, November 13, 2013

11/13 Argumentative Unit: Slip or Trip?

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CCR:
Today we are going to be Criminal Investigators! Please go to the following link and make a copy. You will be taking notes in it. Slip or Trip


State the following in a comment:
State your strongest piece of evidence.  Why is it evidence?

18 comments:

  1. he could have fell

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  2. The author uses no tone words in the story to describe the feeling. She is showing no emotion with her words. She seems to be talking normally.

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  3. He has a glass in
    his hand,therfore he was drinking and fell

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  4. The mirror and candles are not moved
    If someone is falling the try to grab things

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  5. Queenie does not seem like she is to emotional about her husband passing when he falls down the stairs and dies. In the text it doesnt show and evidence of her emotions.

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  6. Arthur's feet are pointing upward on the stairs and Queenie says that he was coming down the stairs.

    Queenie hit Arthur in the head and it killed him.

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  7. The glass is in his left hand and he was coming down so the rail was on his left side so he couldnt have fliped

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  8. How did she know that he was going to get a drink?

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  9. How did she know he was going to get a drink and she got there 10 mins earlier so i think she made up that he was going to get a drink and killed him in the 10 mins she had by herself

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  10. that they were in a fight so she was mad at him and they were both drinking

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  11. she might have hit him with a pan because when you fall down the stairs generally you break bones when you fall down stairs since there were no bones roken he go hit with a pan.

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  12. There are things still hanging on the wall. If he fell down then the things on the wall could have fell. My claim is that she could have killed him. This could be because she didn't show emotion when she told her friends and she had no proof to prove what she said.

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  13. She saying what she should do and since I think she killed he I take it as she like should I put him in the trash.

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  14. The man had to have a weird way of falling down, if he was falling down the steps, the glass he was "holding" was in his left hand, the railing was also in his left hand, so he could of possibly been going backwards if he was reaching for the rail. Basically, the man was backwards when falling so he was somewhat going in a backwards direction.

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  15. the author does not use any tone words in the story describing feelings. she isnt showing emotions she seems normal

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  16. not a lot of details when she said “Something terrible happened"/no feelings so she killed him

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  17. She hit him while going up the steps with a pan and he fell.

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  18. If he fell down the stairs then the stuff on the wall would have fell off the wall

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